Blog 9

In order for me to complete my paper, I must still add my opinion after certain quotes to state why I chose that quote in that place in the essay. I know this because a I read my essay, I notice that I explain why critics say what they say , but I don’t write why I chose that quote. The failure of my paper is that people don’t really care how erll of a performer or an artist she is, they just make their opinion on her based on her actions and my paper does not focus on her actions. The success of my paper is that I focus on her abilities as an artist and put all other opinions on her aside.