Blog 4

My weakness in my writing that I would like to address in Paper 2 is being able to describe and explain my opinion. My conclusion also usually gives me problems and I always have the tendency of straying off topic. To make these improvements, I will introduce my opinion, add a quote, and then give my reasoning for adding and mentioning that specific quote at that particular place in my essay. In order to improve my conclusion, I will focus on recapping rather than introducing other off-topic ideas to just lengthen my paper.